Comic 41 - Section 1-B page 36

10th Dec 2016, 10:10 PM in Section 1-B: Sky - A Lost King Part II
Section 1-B page 36
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Cattimus 10th Dec 2016, 10:10 PM edit delete
Cattimus
The fight begins now...

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Proxy170 13th Dec 2016, 3:40 PM edit delete reply
Proxy170
Finally caught up! Nice work, man! The amount of detail you put into each frame is amazing. And Sky's really expressive, which I find hard for non-human types! The only thing I might recommend is maybe not using so many bolds/italics to emphasize words so often...kinda distracting when reading the dialogue.
Cattimus 13th Dec 2016, 10:00 PM edit delete reply
Cattimus
Thank you so much! And I'm always overthinking how the dialogue should sound. that does help me out a lot. I've already had to rewrite so much dialogue from how I had it originally written. I will certainly work on this!
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