Comic 269 - Section 8 page 066

Section 8 page 066
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Author Notes:

Cattimus 10th Sep 2018, 8:30 AM edit delete
Cattimus
Trixie to the Rescue! At the time of writing this I kind of added her as a combatant on the fly. The more I wrote her the more I fell in love with her character! Enjoy! As a heads up, this week might have extra updates to facilitate my work schedule.

Comments:

chris-tar 10th Sep 2018, 5:33 PM edit delete reply
chris-tar
Suggestion: In between fights I think you should show Sky and his buddies having fun with their super powers, kind of like a game of "super baseball" like from the movie "Twilight" where the vampires went out into the wilderness on a stormy night to mask the sound of their super strong "thunder strikes" against the baseball with the naturally occurring lightning around them so as not to spook the humans.
In Sky's case though, since he is a water bender, I imagine him going out to a lake, waterfall, or river,(or combination of all three), and manipulating the water into geysers that lify himself and his friends high up into the air, and splashing his friends with water cannon balls, or other such fun things. Of course, his friends could use their unique powers in creative ways to add to the excitement. This is just an idea I had. Otherwise, you are doing great with the story. I hope you don't mind my suggestions.
Cattimus 10th Sep 2018, 6:02 PM edit delete reply
Cattimus
I LOOOOVE feedback!!! Thank you so much!! At the time of writing this (2007-2008 i believe) I was so focused on getting to a certain part in the story I hadn’t thought about adding a lot of scenes of downtime. There is a chapter Coming up that is not fight oriented. Also the Arc after this...... starts out with some downtime, but of course I looooove me a good fight! But please continue with any feedback you can think of! I just started experimenting with how I want to write Omakes and side stories. I know manga readers enjoy seeing what people do in their free time outside of battle after battle. Thank you so much!!
chris-tar 10th Sep 2018, 6:39 PM edit delete reply
chris-tar
Thank you for appreciating my feedback!
If you ever did take my advice about adding some extra pages involving downtime for Sky, I think the first place you should put it would be after the final climatic battle with the "Chains Guy". That whole fight really stretched out and was a little emotionally exhausting, so showing sky and his buddies "living it up" for a few pages as a reward would be great! Thanks.
Icefall Kitsune 10th Sep 2018, 10:55 PM edit delete reply
Icefall Kitsune
Cool, I was right about Trixie showing up. And your comment in the Author Notes tells me she will fight for Skye. I hope she's up to the task.
chris-tar is right, seeing what they like to do in the downtime is great and I hope you can add a few panels here and there!
Cattimus 11th Sep 2018, 5:27 AM edit delete reply
Cattimus
I will probably be making a few off-chapter shorts to fill in the gaps. That and I have a habit of doing a loooot of flashbacks. So hose are in there to fill in a lot of questions readers might have. but please oh please continue with the feedback!!! I definitely want to know how I can improve on my story!!
Panda Cop 10th Apr 2020, 11:02 PM edit delete reply
Panda Cop
Great body, i love thick women with decent muscle mass.

Very skinny female characters with huge boobs and asses that are still physically powerful are very upsetting to me.
Cattimus 11th Apr 2020, 1:19 AM edit delete reply
Cattimus
😆 I always try to keep my women......healthy. I've never been a fan of the super skinny big Boobed women depicted in anime. I want my women to have some meat on their bone, and muscle for sure!
Panda Cop 11th Apr 2020, 11:04 PM edit delete reply
Panda Cop
Yeah dude it was the hips here that stood out to me.

I like strong women so i am often critisized for drawing "manly" thick women
Cattimus 11th Apr 2020, 11:45 PM edit delete reply
Cattimus
Well those plebes simply don't appreciate the beauty of women with muscle or thickness! 😁
Panda Cop 11th Apr 2020, 11:49 PM edit delete reply
Panda Cop
Can i feature some of your characters in cosmic warriors battle arena?



http://cosmicwarriors.thecomicseries.com/comics/first/

I am planning to make another round after i finish Kung Fu Grandma 2

I think some of your characters would fit in really well with my cosmic warriors character designs and fighting style.
Cattimus 12th Apr 2020, 6:52 PM edit delete reply
Cattimus
Sure if you want! Granted I haven’t showcased all of what my main cast can do just yet. But if you want them to cameo in the story that is fine with me!
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